diego and i collected some change, purchased chalk, and proceeded to draw all over the rittenhouse fountain.
tons of fun…. go check out our art!
Since i’m working so much at the pool, i started to read more. I just finished the complete short stories of ernest hemingway, which i started two terms ago for my literature class. He’s a great writer, but he often depresses me. Nothing like removing oneself from a book induced fog, to watch people swim laps.
his style is especially effective when he describes the spanish civil war. there is something creepy and appropriate about his simple sentences and omitted thoughts/words/phrases. I also often wonder if his character nick, is really him. or at least very similar to him.
i’m also, almost done brett’s the short stories book by kurt vonnegut. these are really excellent too. I really enjoy short stories.
i’ve had very little to say recently…
maybe later i’ll post unflattering picture of the crin brett diego italian market trip.
1. Speak up in your own crits. You have eyes and opinions, suggestions, etc. SPEAK. Lord knows your prof won’t say anything helpful.
2. Don’t use mental ray physical sun & sky. Its easily spotted and you can create your own lighting that honestly can look better.
3. for fuck’s sake blur your shadows.
4. A little bit more effort into the shaders please. -1o for every shader with no bump/displacement/layers/thought
5. ANIMATION. no one had nice secondary animation. Everyone should have video taped themselves moving to try and get better animation results. RESEARCH! thats how you get better.
6. APPROXIMATION EDITER/SUBDIV SCHEME!
7. Camera cuts!